Oh my, I Rather like this.  It adds a sense of Romanticism to
Happi's character.... I always thought that Cologne was pretty nice, and
that she had had her days of love and adventure.....
	Happosai seems a bit OOC in this.... mainly because in "Big
Trouble in Nekonron China" he flashes back to when he was 18 and he was
still a short dwarf then too.
	From what I know, BTiNC is a valid source, because there WAS a
Manga written about it.... I think.
	Anyways.  Great story, however.  I liked how heartwarming and
touching it is.... it seems to add a sense of humanity to the two
characters.  Question is, how did Happi become so irresponsible and
perverted... and When did Cologne become Matriarch as well as
Proffessional Martial Artist of the ENTIRE Amazon tribe?
	All good Questions.
	Keep up the splendid work.

Sincerely....
~~Kaoru-Shimitsu~~
~Lost "Dragon-Boy" Of Shimitsu-Ryuu.~
~Leader of the Order Of Chaos~~ Member of the Church of Ranma&Ryouga
 ~~Pope of the Cathedral Of Hiroshi/Daisuke <COHD>~~
~~President of the Kaoru Weapons Manufacturing Plant<KWMP>~~

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