PHOOsun wrote:

Well that's it for part 1! The more observant amongst you will have noticed
the Ranma timeline has been shoved forward a lot. A sixteen-year old Ranma
in 1999 is not Ranma-canon. Neither is what I'm doing with the Evangelion
compenent of the story - this is deliberate. This is Alternative.

Easy C&C - the choice fo the new generation. Just cut and paste for your
ideal message.

1) Stop the story, it's no good!
2) Reasonable story.
3) Good! I will be looking for more of this!
4) Exceptional!!
5) The story should have a strong Ranma bias/ style.
6) The story should have a strong Eva bias/ style.
7) Send me part 2 when it's done or I will kill you! ;)
8) Send me part 2 when it's done and I will kill you! :(
9) You're better at script-writing.
10) You should permenantly change to prose.

I'll be picking options:

4) Exceptional!!
7) Send me part 2 when it's done or I will kill you! ;)

Bwahahahahahahah!!!  I love it!!!  Especially Asuka's reaction to her changed
Eva!  <starts cackling>  But for Shinji's Eva... You should get it to look like
his mom, Ikari Yui, because it contains her soul so the body should mirror that.

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Jonathan Tsoi
<tsoi@asu.uswest.net>