Raymond Feist is a great author with the Rift War saga under his belt and now
the Serpant War saga as well.  Some fans will know, the Rift War all started
when a young man by the name of Pug and his friend Thomas discovered a strange
ship.  Now what would happen if the Great One aboard this ship when casting
the spell not only teleported himself to Midemia but somehow pulled Ranma into
Midemia as well.

I would like some C&C on this.  

I will start this story something in the next month or two.

Long