In a message dated 98-06-04 23:49:04 EDT, you write:

<< 
 Beyond that, I thought up a little scene.  Feel free to use it if you like.
  >>
actually, why don't you use it? i've challenged my pre-readers (after Ring
Of Toltiir i kept track of e-mail addresses of the ones volunteering C&C)
to write the chapter 4 side stories. these are the events and breakdowns
occurring in the Second  and Third Week. Ranma gets back in the Fourth
Week.
     Tofu's "tingle" is that he didn't get hit with the full strength dosage.
The
curse will eventually go to the "normal" Juusenkyo curse, then slowly fade
out completely.
     It could be worse, though, as was hinted in the Ukyou sidestory, there's
other waters involved besides the "Bishojo Bride". one is "Amazon Warrior"
and the other....
     the other i'm leaving up for whoever wants to detail it in a sidestory.
Some
of the nasty horrible possibilities suggested have been: "Spring Of Drowned
Nekomimi" (catgirl, like Darkstalker's Felicia), "Spring Of Drowned Senshi"
(has
Jusenkyo been around since the Silver Millenium?), "Spring Of Drowned 
Virtuous Woman," and the "Akane-nichuan" (sp?) any of which could have
really nasty effects when Chapter 5 gets around to Ranma's Return.

ja ne,

gregg sharp, koi no kuroni and general nuisance