From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@slip.net>
Date: Thu, 4 Jun 1998 06:07:42 -0700
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>From Sebastien RENON <renon@dil.univ-mrs.fr>

I know it's not the
point of the story but a bit more devellopment of the first few days
between Ryoga and Lara would be nice. It'll allow us to better know
her before the fun begins.

I disagree.  I think Ryouga is being told too much too soon.  It spoils a
lot of the suspense of the story.

I'm not saying to change the story (Ryoga has no idea of who Lara is
in the first few days) but to show a bit more interraction between him
and kid Lara. These days have got to influence the way he relates to
her when she grows up. That wouldn't lead to any kind of story
devellopment but would fill out Lara a bit more (her personnality
shrunk down to that of a kid. Did she have her whole memory from the
beginning?). Maybe it's just me, But I'd find that interresting.