| Subject: Re: [FFML][repost][fanfic]Lost Boy pt.1 |
| From: Sebastien RENON |
| Date: 6/4/1998, 5:15 AM |
| To: cj@stny.lrun.com |
| CC: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Very interresting story. I enjoyed it, thought it's been a while since I read the Amber Chronicles. One thing, though. I know it's not the point of the story but a bit more devellopment of the first few days between Ryoga and Lara would be nice. It'll allow us to better know her before the fun begins. Anyway, all in all, it's a good story and I'd like to see more of it.