Okay, guys what do you think?  Am I developing things too slowly?  I look
forward to getting your C&C.

It's going slowly, but very well.  Maybe Ranma's putting too much thought
into, but hey, Ranma's allowed to mature and grow just like the rest of us,
right?  Anyway, great story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Just please do one thing!  Finish it!  I'm getting so sick and tired of
people starting multiple chapter fanfics and then leaving the reader
hanging, just because he/she/it(?) is bored with the story!

Also, in my opinion (and remember opinions are like assholes, everyones got
one and they usually stink :) Ranma would pick option three.  Some reasons
for this are:

1. Does he really want to undergo the torture of dating(marrying?) a psycho
like Kodachi, or a scheming manipulator like Shampoo.  Sure Shamps has a
great bod, but her ethics and morality are very...flexible (shudder).
2. If the second dunking in a spring is permanent, then further dunkings
will not work, so option 4 is impossible according to the limitations that
you've set in your story.
3. If you still want to go on with option 4, maybe just do it once.  About
the only person he could probably stand to date/marry would be Ukyo and not
feel guilty/jealous at his other male counterpart who is marrying Akane.

And like I said, good story and keep it up!


Adam Brown

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