| Subject: Re: [FFML]{Fic][Ranma 1/2][ReWrite]Happy Tears |
| From: "D.B.Sommer" <sommer@nb.net> |
| Date: 6/3/1998, 10:26 AM |
| To: "Mike Allen" <allenmk@gte.net>, "Fanfiction Mailing List" <ffml@fanfic.com> |
| CC: "K Yee" <dokushinsha@juno.com>, "Jonathan Ng" <jonathan@worldy.com>, "Ryan Erik" <magusbloodstone@hotmail.com> |
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Much better. With more detail we now understand his pain and the reactions of the other characters much more fully. A well written story. D.B. Sommer