On Wed, 3 Jun 1998, Gary Kleppe wrote:

"D.B.Sommer" <sommer@nb.net> wrote:

You wrote:

	She turned around the corner and came smack into a dead end. 
Trembling, she felt eyes watching her back.  She was afraid to turn
around.  But if she did not turn around and run, her heart was sure to
be eaten.

That paints an interesting picture.

Eat your heart out, Azusa. (But Azusa's little heart is so CUTE!!)

Hehehe

	Ranma didn't even notice Azusa's little slip.

Actually, he did. "Azusa, could you please fix your dress so that won't
show?"

*groan*

	"No bother at all.  Heh, two cute girls get more free food than one,"
Ranma grinned mischievously.  Azusa seemed to perk up already.  Who said
he couldn't think and talk at the same time?

(Gary raises a hand)

^_^

as she caught sight of the cutest cartoons she had ever seen. 

Overfiend cells. Yay!!!

"Those tentacles are just adorable!!!"

Er... no comment

	She didn't know why but she tried to followed the example of those
around her and wrapped her arm around Ranma as they walked to her
mansion.  Azusa eyes widened suddenly.  Her head just cleared.

Bad day for Ranma, I see.

Isn't it always?

I don't think he would want it any other way, ^_^

And why had she pointed at him and called him Jean-Luc? Wait now that he
though about it, she wasn't exactly pointing at him as much as his...

... box.

Er... yeah that's it.

At least it was clean pair.  She couldn't have planned

was a clean pair. Better than a, er, lovely angels.

*groans again*

	Ranma looked at the trophy that sat in the case beside the lobby. 
Furinken's first trophy in the area of martial arts figure skating.  It

Furinkan's. And it ain't that easy to get out of a deal with the
principal....

Heh, leaves me room for another sequel if i feel like it.

Nice story. Typos abounded. But aside from that an enjoyable read.

I agree. Good job!

Thanks for the C & C Gary!

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics