Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2] Pastpresent - Prologue
From: Andrew
Date: 6/3/1998, 12:17 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

At 08:14 PM 6/2/98 +0000, Gary Kleppe wrote:
"Susan Doenime" <sdoenime@hotmail.com> wrote:

	Nodoka and Soun and Nabiki, yes. Happosai, certainly. But 
Principal Kuno? Perhaps not so surprising; the two men were 
alarmingly alike in some ways. 

OK, I'll bite... which ways?

This was a very promising intro. I'm always glad to see a balanced
treatment of Genma, and everybody else was handled very well too.
Probably in the way the two were happy-go-lucky a lot of the time and in
their insane ways of hiding from reality: Principal Kuno with his
Americanization & trips to Hawaii; Genma with his hiding himself as a panda.
As for the 'fic itself, I was very impressed with the way you made the
fanfic flow. I do want to know what caused Kasumi to simply not be her
usual Kasumi? Quite frankly, unless Genma said something that really,
really upset Miss. Polyanna of Japan (Kasumi, that is) I can't see how she
should be that upset. (Actually, I'm surprised that everyone's been sad for
this long. I'm expecting a party any moment now...)