And here I thought that I could at least post a 5k teaser un-proofread
without getting anything wrong. *bashes head into desk* ^_^

Oh, and since someone seemed to have a different expression, I don't
write 25k today and then nothing until another 25k three weeks from
now; I write 5k today and 5k tomorrow and 5k the day after tomorrow
and so on.

 "She did?"

She did? I thought the reason Akane grew her hair long was to match
Kasumi's. Kasumi has long hair in a flashback scene in vol. 2.

Well, the flashback was misremembered, then. :P

Seriously, you're right. I'll gave to work in another way of
making the point that's important in *that* exchange.

Akane had never thought much about it, her thoughts on
Kasumi always focusing on the way she was on,

The way she was on? What do you mean here?

That should've been "focused" and "now", I think.

brown wells of his eyes looking deep into her soul. "Do you feel
better now."

now?"

Yes, now.

...

Err ... :)

I don't know if you can tell where this is heading...

Well, Tofu's secretly running a teenage prostitution ring, and... (or
maybe not.)

:P

Incomfortably close, though. Anyway, thanks for your comments, Gary,
even if I spotted most of that on a reread myself.

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