Ronny Hedin <thark@swipnet.se> wrote:

 The tears started slowly drifting down her cheeks, and Tofuu picked
up a handkercheif, carefully wiping them off. "It's OK, Akane," he

handkerchief

tried to tell her, in a low, comforting voice. "You don't need to
cry."
 
 It was hard to tell if she heard him. "The baka doesn't care about
me at all!" she cried, her voice now utterly broken. "And then, I
heard her tell him she loved him..." The doctors strong arms wrapped

doctor's

about her, but it didn't help much, as she sobbed into his chest.
"Now, I don't have any chance at all!"
 
 "Hush." When her tears slowly subsided, he put a hand her chin,
raising her face so he could look into her bloodshot eyes, his
demeanor radiating sincerity as he smiled at her. "He can't be worth
much if he so mean to a cute girl like you, Akane."
 

if he's so

 He ran his hand through her short, black hair. "I mean it. You can
be so nice when you try to." He smiled, melting her heart all over
again. "And the short hair suits you much better. Did you know your
sister had her this way, too, when she was your age?"
 
 "She did?"

She did? I thought the reason Akane grew her hair long was to match
Kasumi's. Kasumi has long hair in a flashback scene in vol. 2.

Akane had never thought much about it, her thoughts on
Kasumi always focusing on the way she was on,

The way she was on? What do you mean here?

 He kissed her forehead gently, then looked back at her, the deep
brown wells of his eyes looking deep into her soul. "Do you feel
better now."
 

now?"

I don't know if you can tell where this is heading...

Well, Tofu's secretly running a teenage prostitution ring, and... (or
maybe not.)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics