UkyouKwnji@aol.com wrote:

...In a big way. Tora-sempai began to unbutton his fly. He took his... 
asoko... out and waved it at the trembling girl. "Well? Whaddya think? 

Hey, we have words for that in English, y'know.

Not that Tora-sempai's punishment was a common occurrence. Usually, it 
wasn't a serious matter for her to be discovered; at one school she 
remembered quite fondly having been nicknamed 'Shun' after a character in 
a manga series that had garnered fans around campus at the time. Of 

Could just be because they were shunning her... :-)

"Tadaima, Mitsukuru-sensei!" Ukyou's face was a happy mask as she walked 
into the okonomiyaki-ya. 

"Okeri nasai, Ukyou-kun."

I'd like to exchange this fanfiction, please. I asked for the dub. :p

"Bully... after school... tried to..." It was all Ukyou could do to keep 

>from actually crying. Boys didn't cry, after all. Of course, boys don't 

get threatened with rape, either... 

Um, as I understand it, sometimes they do.

Anyway, opinions?  Comments?  I wanna hear it... should this even be *done*?

Sure, it's good so far, and I'd like to read more.

If you're upset by Ukyo's role in the whole thing, I suggest reading
something else to cheer up, like "Final Embrace."


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics