The title, BTW, has very little to do with the story. It's a misquote

>from a Cradle of Filth track.

Heh.  I'd say change it, but then, I'm the man who named his mega-xover 
after a song because he liked a few lines in it that matched the theme.

And apologies to Chris Angel, who appears at the very end.

None required.  I have very little problem with my avatar's portrayal.

All that said, people, I'd like to make a request: ASK ME BEFORE USING 
MY AVATAR.  I LIKE lending him out.  It's fun competing with Zen for 
"most lent out avatar" (I think I'm winning, too) but it's just polite 
to ask first.

Don't worry, I'm not mad.

<SNIP>

Authors notes: 
Well, this came to me last night. I had an idea of introducing myself 

as

the Grim Reaper, or God of Death. But no. This idea came to me, after
remembering that idea.

And, IMO, it was reasonably well done.  An engrossing read, to say the 
least.  I don't know if it was intentional, but I found the sort of 
"detached" feeling to go rather well with the despair and hopelessness 
your character displays.

Chris Angel can write well.

Aww...shucks.  Stop it, you'll make me blush. *grin*

I hope he isn't
offended by his portrayal in this, and I hope I don't get flamed by too
many people for this twisted fable.

I have no problem door with the way he was portrayed in this.  It seemed 
to fit in with his characterization perfectly.  (Although, I like to 
think of him as more of the Highlander-style-decapitation type than the 
swords-through-the-head type.  ^_^;)

What I do have a problem with is the HUGE plot hole you've created with 
the Valkyries.  If the Goddesses had enough warning to summon Valkyries 
to protect them, they'd have MORE than enough time to call up my avatar.  
(Remember his powers?)  I'd recommend that you remove the idea that they 
had THAT much warning.  Maybe a few seconds - enough to prepare 
themselves, but not enough to call mine noble avatar.

P.S. I'm not like that in real life!

I damn well hope so!

--
Christopher 'God-Boy' Angel
c_j_angel@hotmail.com
http://www.geocities.com/~ca_godboy

Tenchi: "What's with you?"
Chris:  "They're...they're...hypnotic."
Tenchi: "Huh?  Oh, THEM.  Yeah, they are nice, ne?"
Chris:  "NICE?  They DEFY GRAVITY, man!"

                      -No Need for 'Niichan/Turn the Page

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