On Wed, 27 May 1998, Gary Kleppe wrote:
Sorry, Donny... there were some nice moments in this fic, but the
blatant character bias in it ruined the fic for me. From the title
onward, most of this fic reads like an attack on Akane. Most of the
story harps on her bad points, while pretty much ignoring everyone
else's.
I'm not saying I won't like your fic unless you have the same favorite
characters as me. But I don't want to read something that (IMO) is less
a story than an attack on one of these characters. Besides, you've shown
already that you can do better.
Sorry, it's just something that I've always wanted to get off my chest.
Feel free to ignore it and think of it as ravings from a lunatic. It
wouldn't be too far from the truth. But, I thought it also showed bad
points on Ranma. He's my favorite character but sometimes he just doesn't
think right. Sorry you didn't like the story Gary and thanks for telling
me.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics