*Smiles* Okay.... now THIS is simply MUCH better.  Great
Scansion, good use of words, nice arrangement of the lines....
	I commend you your poetic talent. *Bows*

Sincerely....
~~Kaoru-Shimitsu~~
~Lost "Dragon-Boy" Of Shimitsu-Ryuu.~
~Leader of the Order Of Chaos~~ Member of the Church of Ranma&Ryouga
 ~~Pope of the Cathedral Of Hiroshi/Daisuke <COHD>~~
~~President of the Kaoru Weapons Manufacturing Plant<KWMP>~~

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