Subject: Re: [FFML][FANFIC][X-OVER][X-DBZ] "Power isn't all" - Part 1 (draft)
From: Phuc Tram
Date: 5/21/1998, 10:45 PM
To: Ronny Hedin
CC: ffml@fanfic.com, Sebastien RENON <renon@dil.univ-mrs.fr>

On Fri, 22 May 1998, Ronny Hedin wrote:

Considering how he's acted in the past, I really doubt "I must be polite"
is something that could ever be coming from Goten. They might've been
separated from birth, but he's much more of his father's son than Gohan
ever were; just a wee bit more rough would do it. Being uncertain about
talking to strangers? When you can blow up planets? I think not.

I wouldn't say that.  Goten is still at an impressionable age and being
polite is something that his mother would keep trying to drum into him.
As well as Gohan.  And now, Videl.

As for blowing up planets?  So what?  There may always be _someone_ that
could give a half-way decent fight.

<Who is this kid. His hand... It's like living stone. >

kid?

Yes.  Kid.  He _is_ only about nine, or so, years old.
Remember, this is six _months_ after the Buu saga.

All in all, I liked this story and look forward to more.


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