Subject: Re: [FFML] FANFIC, RANMA1/2, LEMON, (Not Ranma 1/2 v1p2: Lemon Tea)post1
From: redneck@txdirect.net (Redneck Gaijin)
Date: 5/17/1998, 1:18 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

It is just me or do we have another example of an 
"annoying-all-knowing-omnipotent-original-character-who-gets-all-the-gir  
ls-and-boys" here? Ranko here is a little too capable.

This was my main problem with it too. Ranko has just -too- much power and
goodies, and the story stops -dead- while Skuld goes through the 'shopping
list.' Furthermore, a complication that could have provided a very
interesting story arc ("You I kill!") is sidestepped by a deus ex machina so
transparent as to turn the stomach.

Still... it's not like Takahashi-sama hasn't introduced characters with
similar levels of cheesiness herself... (I keep thinking of Rouge...)

Redneck

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