If I had not been jaded by all the other 'Evil' fics, I'd probably be able
to C&C this better.

Continuity, Continuity, Continuity.  If Genma is Ranma's mother, then
who's Nadoka?  Why does Soun wail the passing of his wife if he -is- the
wife?  Why do the two bakas care if the dojo is passed on if it was given
by Happosai?  If the curses are permanent, then how did Genma get another
curse?  (by it's own definition, Genma should now be curse proof)

Working this type of thing into a fanfic is admittedly difficult, but the
only truly evil fics are the ones that could "really" happen.  When I read
this, my thoughts weren't on the awkwardness of the situation, but on
the issues that I presented above.  Ultimately, it distracts from the
content of the fic.

-Natsume Ranma Ranma
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The sardines weren't worth the trouble.  A few more shots, then 
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode.  Ducking around a corner, 
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of 
my Anime supplier..

One look at his face and I knew that I was betrayed.  "Tell me."
I insisted.  He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance.  Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao." he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the 
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...