Some of the multi-confusion scenes in ch1 were absolutely *priceless*,
and of course, a female Tarou on its own is worth a lot of laughs.

Tsk. Just had to give Ryouga a superpowered attack, didja? I hope
at least an explanation for that will arrive.

Generally, I'd probably like it more if you focused on the comedic
aspects, but all-in-all it's a fairly well-written story, provided all
the stuff that keep appearing is going to be tied together somewhere
further along.

You can hardly keep claiming it's only "what if Ukyou came along",
though. ;)

   Apparently this had gone on for a few days before Ranma's father had
found out, and he encouraged it, as did Ukyou's father, who both thought of
it as a way of training.  If Ranma won the fight, he got a free dinner.  If
Ukyou won, Ranma got chased off, though it seemed that the ponytailed boy
hadn't lost yet.

father, both of them thinking of it as

short temper, and although he tried his hardest not to blow up at his
daughters, it was bound to happen sometimes, and led to frightening
confrontations between him and his strong-willed children.  Another, if

sometimes, which led to frightening

   Some people, though, continued to look on interestedly at the
spectacle, and reacted without much surprise and scattered applause when
another figure jumped out of the side alley, this time, another young girl,

this time another


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