Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Ranma] Mirror Images, Prologue and Chapter 1
From: Adam Brown
Date: 5/15/1998, 5:17 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

I have to admit, Mirror Images is a very good, complex story that has
convulted sub plots, but still manages to be entertaining despite it's
complexity.

The only problem I had with the story is that there weren't enough names
used.  Lots of he's, and she's, and I quickly lost track of who was talking
(especially in a dialog of three or more people).

Allow me to illistrate:

We have 4 guys (ranma, ryoga, turo and konatsu).  Three of the four turn
into girls.

We also have one girl (ukyo) who turns into a guy.

Now in an extensive dialog involving all parties, using 'he said' or 'she
said' alot becomes very confusing.  Especially if you add cold/hot water to
the mix.

Other than that, I thuroughly enjoyed the story and am looking forward to
the next chaper.

Just one question though, who is Ryoushi?  I don't remember him mentioned
anywhere in Ranma.  (I haven't seen or read all the anime or manga, but I
though I'd heard of most of the villians/heros introduced throughout the
course of Ranma, but maybe not)



Adam Brown