I have to admit, Mirror Images is a very good, complex story that has
convulted sub plots, but still manages to be entertaining despite it's
complexity.
The only problem I had with the story is that there weren't enough names
used. Lots of he's, and she's, and I quickly lost track of who was talking
(especially in a dialog of three or more people).
Allow me to illistrate:
We have 4 guys (ranma, ryoga, turo and konatsu). Three of the four turn
into girls.
We also have one girl (ukyo) who turns into a guy.
Now in an extensive dialog involving all parties, using 'he said' or 'she
said' alot becomes very confusing. Especially if you add cold/hot water to
the mix.
Other than that, I thuroughly enjoyed the story and am looking forward to
the next chaper.
Just one question though, who is Ryoushi? I don't remember him mentioned
anywhere in Ranma. (I haven't seen or read all the anime or manga, but I
though I'd heard of most of the villians/heros introduced throughout the
course of Ranma, but maybe not)
Adam Brown