I have to admit, Mirror Images is a very good, complex story that has
convulted sub plots, but still manages to be entertaining despite it's
complexity.

Domo. :)  About the complexity, though - MI is *very* easy to work on in
that respect as compared to Ryoga 1/2. <g>

The only problem I had with the story is that there weren't enough names
used.  Lots of he's, and she's, and I quickly lost track of who was talking
(especially in a dialog of three or more people).

I was afraid that this problem might pop up.  Could you tell me
specifically where this was the most troublesome, so I can correct it?

Other than that, I thuroughly enjoyed the story and am looking forward to
the next chaper.

I'll try to hammer it out before my muse decides that it's time for me to
work on something else, anyway. ;)

Just one question though, who is Ryoushi?  I don't remember him mentioned
anywhere in Ranma.  (I haven't seen or read all the anime or manga, but I
though I'd heard of most of the villians/heros introduced throughout the
course of Ranma, but maybe not)

Ryoushi's an original character.  Hopefully not an ANC, but he's my own
creation. :)

Hunter Kid
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    The slender girl, Ryako, only gave him a cute, yet somewhat wolfish,
grin.  "Aw, you're no fun, Ryoga," she said, hitting him on the shoulder
playfully.  "Here we are, so close, and you won't let me read what you're
writing?"  She snuggled up against him, smirking to herself.
    Ryoga apparently didn't notice that she was only kidding, because his
face glowed a bright red and he nervously inched away from her.  "C-close?"
 He stammered.  "I...well...you see..."   
			 			-from Ryoga 1/2, chapter 11
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