This was a excellent story!  Not only did you explore some possible
pairings that I've rarely seen before, but you managed to find a
plauable explantion as to why they were all together.  

I was especially impressed with the Kasumi/Kunou and Ukyou/Gosunkugi
pairings, a very unique way of interpeting their possible hidden
motives.  Even the Mousse/Cologne pairing, while quite frightening to
say the least, made sense.  

All in all, a job well done, Gary!  :)

Sincerely,

Megane 6.7