Well, you've all heard me plugging it relentlessly and telling you that
'it'll be done soon' - finally, it actually *is* done! :)

I revised the first three chapters (and added a sort of 'anteprologue,' if
you want to call it that, explaining just how Tarou shows up) wherever I
thought the quality was lax, or where I thought that there wasn't enough
information provided.

Now, since a revision isn't really a big deal, I held off on releasing it
until I finished chapter 4.  I just finished it earlier today, and I'm
actually rather proud of it. :)  Some will criticize it for not being as
action-packed as the first three, but... <shrug>

Ch4 introduces some new characters, and explores a bit of an old one.  This
will show up on my website shortly, after (hopefully), I receive comments
on what could be better about it on here, and will also be posted to RAAC
at the same time.

Enjoy the fic.  Oh yeah, and C&C/MST, please!  I've been having problems
getting C&C of late (my 'Ice' fic got absolutely none, for example), and I
really am curious to know what you think.

:)

Rain Song
http://www.serve.com/guilds/ranma/
guilds@mail.serve.com

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    The slender girl, Ryako, only gave him a cute, yet somewhat wolfish,
grin.  "Aw, you're no fun, Ryoga," she said, hitting him on the shoulder
playfully.  "Here we are, so close, and you won't let me read what you're
writing?"  She snuggled up against him, smirking to herself.
    Ryoga apparently didn't notice that she was only kidding, because his
face glowed a bright red and he nervously inched away from her.  "C-close?"
 He stammered.  "I...well...you see..."   
			 			-from Ryoga 1/2, chapter 11
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