On Sun, 10 May 1998, Sam Vilsmeier wrote:

I only read the first part of this, but it seems to be a script-format
Split Personalities rip-off. :P

Split Personalities was a totaly OOC, sex obsessed,  and just plain bad
split-ranma fict.

If I recall, a non-hentai version of SP was done, for those who didn't
want the sex.  

Beyond that...

Split-Ranma works have been done left, right, and center.  What are you
going to do to make yours stand out?  You're delving into one of those
areas where the standards have been raised very high.  If you can meet
those standards, fine.  If not, be prepared to face the wrath of the ML.
Right now, your work looks *very* unoriginal, and you're going to have to 
struggle to make it into something special.  

-- Nick