On Mon, 11 May 1998 00:26:22 -0500 (EST) Junie Salvania
<rsalva1@umbc2.umbc.edu> writes:

I don't think it really matters that much.  Splitting Ranma has been a
favorite theme in a lot of stories.  Besides, I actually want to see
for once a complete story.

Now THAT is a sentiment I definitely share.  It's curious, but I haven't
seen a single splitting Ranma series finished before.  If I'm wrong,
someone please tell me.  Also, Nick made some pretty good points.  You
fic isn't anything to write home about at the moment, but it does have
promise.  Just like "Split Personalities" does (*grin* You ever gonna
finish that Roy?  Isn't that tournament deadline thing over yet?).  So
unless you plan on making something monumental, I suggest you keep flames
off the list.  I look forward to more of your work, not your flames.  Ja.

doKuSHInsHA
Member of the #AAS#: Achika Appreciation Society

On Sun, 10 May 1998, Rain Song wrote:

I only read the first part of this, but it seems to be a 

script-format

Split Personalities rip-off. :P

Split Personalities was a totaly OOC, sex obsessed,  and just plain 

bad

split-ranma fict.

Still, you have to admit that you did copy the first part of your 

fic from

that.  And besides, SP was pretty well-written, even if you didn't 

care for

the subject matter.

Rain Song
http://www.serve.com/guilds/ranma/
guilds@mail.serve.com

open hk.sig

    He shook his head.  No, natural disasters were all too 

destructive for

this vague feeling to represent.  
    An assassin!
    Yes, that had to be it.  What else would give a feeling like 

this?  He

was about to get a knife in the back.  It was so obvious it hurt.  

No,

wait, that wasn't what hurt.  Someone was pinching his neck.
    "Hey," he stated irritatedly, coming out of his daze and looking 

up.

"Oh...er, hiya, Ukyou-chan."   
			 			-from Mirror 

Images, chapter 3

[hk.sig; errors-0; file terminating]

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