K Yee wrote:

Umm, it's a pretty good beginning AFTER Ranma's death only because it's
pretty obvious you've taken a whole bunch of material STRAIGHT from
Lawson's "Storm's End" and just pasted it into your story.  Hopefully
this was an honest mistake, but if you're going to do that, you
DEFINITELY and ABSOLUTELY need the author's permission.  If you did get
Lawson's permission, that's fine, but you need to put tell us that in the
beginning of the fic or people will assume (like I did) that you are just
plagiarizing off of him.

I did get his permission, unfortunatly I forgot to include that little peace
of info.gomen nasai.

I suggest you put out a post acknowledging your
mistake or, if Lawson did give you permission to use his fic verbatim,
say so.  Like I said, an interesting beginning but the first part
(Ranma's death scene) definitely needs to be clarified as to who's it
really is.

doKuSHInsHA
Member of the #AAS#: Achika Appreciation Society

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