Subject: Re: [FFML][SM][X-over]Sestuna's Secret
From: Barry Cadwgan
Date: 5/3/1998, 6:50 AM
To: mathews1@gte.net
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Disruptor wrote:

I don't know if this has been done but here you go. I know that they'll
probably be out of character. I'm sorry

Legal disclaimer:I do not own the property of the characters I used and
I do not seek to use them for profit. Please don't sue me

                        SESTUNA'S SECRET
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<snip>


        "I know, but it has to be this way. All right now, first get ahold of
my staff so the sphere is pointin away from me. Now lift up the back of
my skirt, remember no questions, there you'll find a small hole. Please

in the small of her back.

insert the staff into the hole."

        Usagi looked very concered about her friend, but did what she was told.
She started to freak out when she saw the hole in Sestuna's back, but
remember that this was to help he friend. She inserted the staff into
her friend and with a sharp click it slid into place.

        "Now what Sestuna?"

        "Use the other end to rotate the staff from left to right.", Sestuna
responded

        Usagi quipped, "You know something I fell like I'm winding up a toy
soldier."

Need to put in something about the SFX..


        "Please Usagi, no jokes, and yes you are winding me up. Selene's last
order to me was to make sure that you would have control over me.  I
have a circut in me that pervents me from disobeying the person who
winds me up. No don't even bother trying to cure me of my condition.
Selene made sure that I would always be around like this."

        Looking appaled, Usagi changed the subject, "By the way you never did
tell me the name of your universe.", looking thoughtful for a minute she

.. name of your home."  perhaps?

asked, "You said the weapon was based on one of your world's weapons. If
you are the weapon Selene brought back, who were you based on?"

        "My world's name is El Hazard and my 'sister', I guess you would call
her, was named Ifurita."


Well, overall, you just need to clean up the punctuation and spelling
and it's a fascinating concept/shortfic!


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Now I'd better go work on my Revenge Wars stuff

^_^  You mean there's _more_?


-- Barry Cadwgan ( BCADWGAN@FL.NET.AU ) http://www.users.fl.net.au/~bcadwgan/homepage.htm "The end does not justify the means. The end is the sum of the means, as the road travelled determines the destination." Valijon Starbringer (Hellflower Trilogy, Eluki bes Shahar)