Subject: Re: [FFML] [R1/2] YANMS pt. 2
From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 4/30/1998, 8:23 PM
To: "'ffml@ffml.fanfic.com'" <ffml@ffml.fanfic.com>

Jonathan Haas <jhaas@microsoft.com> wrote:

Sorry this has been so long coming. Truthfully, I wrote it many months ago,
but I just don't *like* it very much. Something about this story just
doesn't feel right. But I've received a few requests for it, so I guess I'll
post it anyway. Be gentle.

I see what you mean, I guess. It's a really nice piece of writing, but
it's hard for me to believe that Genma did what he seems to have done.
While he's certainly not one of the world's more honorable people,
there's a limit to what I think he'd do, and this goes way past it.

So I'd say it looks like a well-written story with a dubious premise,
unless there's more to it that we don't know about yet.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics