A bit lacking in effective drama, IMO, but nicely done nonetheless.  This
has the potential to be very interesting.

As an aside, you said that this had failed to get comments before - you
might want to try changing the title to english.  I tend to skip over stuff
with a japanese title.

Rain Song
http://www.serve.com/guilds/ranma/
guilds@mail.serve.com

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    Tarou disappeared into the house.  "To change my clothes," she shouted
back at him.
    Ukyou was silent for a moment as he sat back and lounged on the porch,
leaning against one of the wooden supports.  After he was sure that Tarou
was out of hearing range, he burst out laughing.
    "To change his clothes!"  He guffawed.  "I swear that curse's mentality
is rubbing off on him."    
			 			-from Mirror Images, chapter 4
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