First off, I wish to apologize to everyone.  I did not mean to send my story
in HTML format.  I recently switched machines and unfortunately, HTML format
is the default for Outlook Express.

The wrapping problem should not have occurred, if I had properly sent it in
text format.

Thank you all for the C&C so far.  I am compiling them and will make
corrections as are necessary.  Such as Kasumi being OOC.

Yes, I intentionally made Akane very one dimensional in this installment.
It was supposed to be a bad day for Ranma.  Whenever Akane is pleasant to
Ranma, his day usually turns out normal for him.

Thanks for the grammar tips, also.  I was unsure how to punctuate speech and
figured too much would be better than not enough.

The story is leading to a solution as to how Ranma can successfully and
honorably settle his relationships.

Once again,  thanks for the reading and the critiques.

Mike