Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic][Rewrite][new-name]Deja-vu
From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 4/25/1998, 10:50 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

"Smiling Kitty AKA Shadow Dancer" <danceshadows@geocities.com> wrote:

I know there have been people asking about how Alternate Landings 
is coming...let's just say the original plaotline was trashed for 
several reasons.  I'm re-starting the series...hopefully I'll have it 
back to the original name in a while...but for now, here it is.

It's an interesting concept... I hadn't read the original, and I'm
curious to see what caused the changes in Ranma and how they fit
together.

The switch in narration from first person Ranma, to third person, to
first person Akane was kind of confusing. It seems to me that this would
read better as a third person past tense story, but maybe that's just
me.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics