"Smiling Kitty AKA Shadow Dancer" <danceshadows@geocities.com>
wrote:
I know there have been people asking about how Alternate Landings
is coming...let's just say the original plaotline was trashed for
several reasons. I'm re-starting the series...hopefully I'll have it
back to the original name in a while...but for now, here it is.
It's an interesting concept... I hadn't read the original, and I'm
curious to see what caused the changes in Ranma and how they fit
together.
The original is on my website,
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/6418/links.htm
Under the name of Alternate Landings.
The switch in narration from first person Ranma, to third person, to
first person Akane was kind of confusing. It seems to me that this
would read better as a third person past tense story, but maybe
that's just me.
It was more confusing before..believe me..:)
Actually, I'm trying to get the third person parts out and replace
them with first person ones..:)
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics
Shadow Dancer
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/6418/links.htm
Shadow Dancer Niko Neko
Shadow-Chan Niko-Chan
ShadowChan@cybergal..com NikoNeko@geocities.com
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Imagination is a Pegasus, Of all the animals in the world,
Wild and Free, I wish I were a duck,
Never to be tethered, I'd swim along the river shore,
Tamed by you or me. And watch the people...fish.
(c) Mar 29, 1997, Shadow Dancer (c) I don't know who, I don't know when