Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma][Fanfic][Rewrite][new-name]Deja-vu
From: "Smiling Kitty AKA Shadow Dancer" <danceshadows@geocities.com>
Date: 4/25/1998, 4:55 AM
To: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com
Reply-to:
ShadowChan@cybergal.com

"Smiling Kitty AKA Shadow Dancer" <danceshadows@geocities.com>
wrote:

I know there have been people asking about how Alternate Landings 
is coming...let's just say the original plaotline was trashed for 
several reasons.  I'm re-starting the series...hopefully I'll have it 
back to the original name in a while...but for now, here it is.

It's an interesting concept... I hadn't read the original, and I'm
curious to see what caused the changes in Ranma and how they fit
together.

The original is on my website, 

http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/6418/links.htm

Under the name of Alternate Landings.

The switch in narration from first person Ranma, to third person, to
first person Akane was kind of confusing. It seems to me that this
would read better as a third person past tense story, but maybe
that's just me.

It was more confusing before..believe me..:)

Actually, I'm trying to get the third person parts out and replace 
them with first person ones..:)

Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics

Shadow Dancer
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/6418/links.htm

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