Subject: [FFML] The Official Synopsis List Review April 4-10
From: Elsa Bibat
Date: 4/23/1998, 2:04 AM
To: "'ffml@fanfic.com'" <ffml@fanfic.com>

Disclaimer:
The opinions in this review are not shared by the Synopsis list
moderators. They are the opinions of the reviewer, namely one
Elsa Bibat. 

[ We see our erstwhile reviewers sitting in their seats.They are
obviously exhausted from the snoring that one can hear.]

Voice: Wake up, you idiots !

Apollo & Lavender: Wah !?!?

Voice: Time for the Review ! Move your ass and you still have 
           four more fics to star in left !

Lavender: Hello folks. Welcome to the Synopsis List Review.

Apollo: On with the fics ! The faster that we get through with this 
            the faster we get some sleep before the slave driver
            starts writing our fic.                                

 

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[Ah! Megami-Sama!]

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Title: Ice Cream
Series: Ah! My Goddess (or Oh My Goddess, or Ah! Megami-sama)
Genre: Altered reality
Author: Matthew "Maybeso" Lewis
email: maybeso@ican.net
Homepage: N/A

Date sent to FFML: March 6, 1998
Size: 42 kb

Lavender: Cute. Really cute.
Apollo: Really. He means it. And it had nice enough format for an 
           attachment.
Lavender: Anyway, nice fic overall and it's nice to see that you finally
               finished. Here's eight roses.  
 
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[Ah! Megami-Sama!/Urusei Yatsura]

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Title: "Urusei Megamisama!", Chapter Nine: "Judgments and Deliberations"
Series: Ah! Megamisama! and Urusei Yatsura
Genre: Romantic Comedy (Epic Tragedy?)
Author: Henry J. Cobb
Email: hcobb@slip.net
Homepage: http://www.io.com/~hcobb/anime/fanfic/chaos.html

Date Sent to FFML: 7th April 1998
Size: 18608

Lavender: An excellent continuation of the series, Mr. Cobb.
Apollo: Koku !
Lavender: It means he agrees. And nice format. What would we
              give to see all fanfic writers to write with proper grammar
              and wordwrap. Ten roses, Cobb, we especially like this
              one.  

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[El Hazard/Ah! Megami-Sama!]

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Title: "Happily ever after...?"
Series: El Hazard/ Oh My Goddess
Genre: Crossover
Author: Barry Cadwgan
Email: bcadwgan@fl.net.au
Homepage: http://www.users.fl.net.au/~bcadwgan/homepage.htm
 
Date Sent to FFML: 6 April 1998
Size: 16k

Lavender: All that we can say is.
Apollo: Hurry up with the next part !
Lavender: Yeah. We're getting antsy. An original concept and your
               writing style kicks ass for it. A must read in our opinion.
               Ten roses. 

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[Macho Caballo]

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Title:  Mare's Tales - Macho Caballo Chapter 22 [revision]
Series: Macho Caballo
Genre:  Humor/Drama/Original
Author:  James Eades (James and the Bluejay)
Email:  jeeades@ix.netcom.com
Homepage:  http://www2.netcom.com/~jeeades/macho.htm

Title:  Mare's Tales - Macho Caballo Chapter 23 First Impressions
Series: Macho Caballo
Genre:  Humor/Drama/Original
Author:  James Eades (James and the Bluejay)
Email:  jeeades@ix.netcom.com
Homepage:  http://www2.netcom.com/~jeeades/macho.htm

Lavender: You really didn't have to rewrite 22.But the revision is definitely
               better. 
Apollo: Still nice format and not much mistakes in the grammar department.
Lavender: And 23 whet our appetites for more. Write faster ! Ten roses.            

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[Ranma 1/2]

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Title:  Doors Best Left Unopened part 7
Series:  Ranma
Genre:  Serious
Author:  Mark MacKinnon
Email:  emmack@ibm.net
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Ginza/8225

Date Sent to FFML:  Apr. 8/98
Size:  102 k

Lavender: Four words describe the entire work: Classic-in-the-making !
               The chapter keeps up the quality of the series and adds more
               to the tension.
Apollo: Nice clean grammar too ! Plus the format.       
Lavender: A definite must-read for anyone out there ! Things are getting more 
              interesting. Ten roses, Mr. Mckninnon.    

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Title: Fulfillment, Chapters 1-3
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Comedy
Author: Scott K. Jamison / SKJAM!
Email: majks@cyberx.com
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Flats/5990
 
Date Sent to FFML: April 2, 1998
Size:
 
Lavender: Scott's idea is really interesting !
Apollo: Especially the ending of chapter 3. Hehe.
Lavender: And the POV helps a lot. A series I will surely
              be waiting for. Nine roses.   

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Title: Kasumi's Wish Chapter 4
Series: Ranma 1/2 / Ah Megami-sama
Genre: Alternate
Author: Long Ngo
Email: ShortYes@aol.com
Homepage: http://members.aol.com/ShortYes/FanficHomepage.html
                   http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Dojo/2881/Kasumi.htm

Date Sent to FFML: April 7, 1998
Size: ?????

Lavender: Good.
Apollo: It's clean enough.
Lavender: The idea is nice. Though I worry about what happens when the
               other fiancees start arriving. An interesting concept though your
              writing style needs abit of polish. Eight roses.             

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Title:	Nabiki - New Horizons Chapter 13
Series:  Ranma 1/2
Genre:  Continuation / Focus: Nabiki Tendo-Lawrence
Author:  G.L. Sandborn
Email:  sandborn@microlink.net
Homepage:  www.microlink.net/~sandborn

Date Sent to FFML:  3/29/98
Size:  90K

Lavender: One word: More !
Apollo: No complaints in the grammar departrment.
Lavender: Write faster, Mr. Sandborn. We want more !
               To those who haven't read the series yet go
               to Mr. Sandborn's homepage and get the entire
               series. Trust me you won't regret it. Ten roses.   
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Title: Ruler of the Raging Main Part 3
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Historical Adventure
Author: J. Austin Wilde
Email: wildeman@psn.net
Homepage: None

Date Sent to FFML: 8 APR 98
Size: 59K

Lavender: This shows the reason why we worship Wilde as a fanfic
               writer god.
Apollo: Clean nice format.
Lavender: A riveting storyline, great storytelling and a masterful plot.
               To anyone who hasn't started reading this, read it. Ten roses.  
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Title: Shampoo 1/2 Chapter 22: Unexpected Guests
Series: Ranma 1/2
Genre: Alternate Universe
Author: D.B. Sommer
Email: sommer@nb.net
Homepage: http://www.geocities.com/~azatlan/Special-Series/shampoo.html

Lavender: Definitely one of the better chapters in the series.
Apollo: And nice clean format with a few grammar mistakes.
Lavender: The introduction of Silk is interesting. I think you're
               already planning for the things hinted at in the 
               interludes ? The series is getting more exciting the
               more it progresses. Ten roses.   

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[Ranma 1/2 / Bubblegum Crisis]

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Title:  How Do I File This One
Series:  Ranma/BGC (AD Police Files)
Genre:  Eh... dunno
Author:  David A. Tatum
Email:  desaix@sysnet.net
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Acropolis/7872/fanfics.htm

Date Sent to FFML:4/6/98
Size:

Lavender: Weird.
Apollo: Yup.
Lavender: It is quite an interesting fic. Seven roses would be enough, I think.  

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[Ranma 1/2 / MST3k]

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Title: "Mystery Science Theater 6.7" Episode 14: Ranko's Life
Series: Ranma 1/2 - Mystery Science Theater 3000 
Genre: MSTing/Unusual Setting
Author: Megane 6.7
Email: fcasper@yesic.com

Homepage: http://www.winnipeg.freenet.mb.ca/~cto427/megane.htm
	  http://www.winnipeg.freenet.mb.ca/~cto427/ran_fics.htm#Mega
Date Sent to FFML: April 6, 1998

Lavender & Apollo : HAHAHAHAHAHAHA !
Lavender: Nice MST ! 
Apollo: Nice format too.
Lavender: Though the fic that you MSTed wasn't that bad. Eight roses.

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[Ranma 1/2 /Sailor Moon/Dragonball]

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Title: TRIO: SIDE STORY: What If...
Series: Ranma 1/2, Sailor Moon, Dragon Ball Z
Genre: Crossover
Author: The Flashman
Email: MXJK67C@Prodigy.com
Homepage: Coming soon...

Date Sent to FFML: 10:35 PM Thursday
Size: Small

Lavender: It's going to be really interesting when the TRIO series 
              comes to an end. The romantic entaglements that Flashman
              has created will be really messy.
Apollo: It's format is nice and clean.
Lavender: A good side story elaborating on Usagi's and Ranma's relationship.
              Keep up the good work ! Ten roses.  

* * * * *
[Tenchi Muyou!]

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Title: The Gentle Sound of Thunder
Series: Tenchi Muyo!
Genre: Darkfic
Author: BGlanders
Email: BGlanders@aol.com
Homepage: none
 
Date Sent to FFML:??
Size:??
 
Lavender: I assume you have read Akutagawa Ryunosuke's Rashomon ?
Apollo: The fic has that quality to it. And nice clean format and not much
            grammar mistakes by the way.
Lavender: This fic is a classic. Damn good use of POV to complete the story.
               One of the best Tenchi Muyo fics I read. Ten roses. A must read by
               my book.    
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Lavender: Another round finished !
Apollo: This is gettingh tiresome.
Lavender: Anyway, our two parts of our fic is out could _anyone_
              at least give us C&C on it.
Apollo: We mean anyone.
Lavender: An MST would be nice, but all we want is C&C. Please !
Voice: Stop whining ! Back to work !
Lavender: See you in the next SLR ! 
    
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