From: H. Torrance Griffin <heretic@jhunix.hcf.jhu.edu>

Cute setup, but you should tru to do something about the non-ACCII
quotes.

I thought I had. :-(

Ranma/Akane, Shampoo/Ukyo: No Comments Needed

It's official, the Kuno's _are_ a dysfunctional family.

^_^ You ain't seen nothin' yet. (Or maybe you have...)

Minor Nit: I see no real reason why Mousse would hide his
connections with Cologne from Nabiki (I can see a rational for doing the
converse although I doubt Cologne would have much against such a _cunning_
wimp).

Further info will follow. I think I've come up with a good reason...

Nice touch about Kasumi and Tofu's double life.  Even nice touch
about the two people outwardly most eager about the Ranma/Akane match are
the only people who really oppose it.

Thanks. My pre-reader really liked that bit too.

Ryoga: I don't think the entire thing about Akiri is needed.
especially as it seems that you are setting P-chan up to kick over the
central suppourt of the entire mansion of cards <evil grin>

Oh, I'll be adding in a number of spurious things, and several things that
look spurious, but aren't, only you won't find out for several chapters...
^_^

Feel free to continue with this.

Thanks, I will. ^_^

Morpheus
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