At 04:17 AM 4/14/98 -0400, you wrote:

This is a fun story.  Plain and simple.  It's done well considering the
huge number of seperate characters involved. 

Thanks!

 Two quirks I have however,

one since the beginning.  Power Levels.  The power levels of the
characters in this series are so different as to be hard to compare.
Some can destory a building, others a city, a few a planet.  Tenchi, of
course, tops them all by quite a margin (making him the best choice for
Moon... good job there).

That and the "2-D vote" that I've got when i first released this idea  . .
. but lets not offend Moon and Tenchi fans here :)

  Mr. Walks out of a black hole like he's taking

a Sunday stroll.  This leads to my second quirk... why didn't you
integrate the Light Hawk Wings into Moon's armament?  I figure at least
his finishing move should involve it (not just a glowing blue sword, but
actually have the whole Wings involved).  Overall it's a fun read, keep
it up.
PMasters  

Eh?  Tenchi has wings like moon does later in the series?  Mind give me the
details?


Adrian Wong