Simba <gomen@bigpond.com> wrote:

DUSTY DEATH		

If you are having trouble understanding what this is about, it's about
the death of Akane's mother. The little girl is Akane, although that is
not very clear. I feel that she was the one least affected, as her
mother had died when Akane was very young. 

Nicely written deathfic... but the Christian mythology (angels, etc.)
really felt out of place. With the Tendos, one would think it should've
been Shinto or Buddhist instead. While this was an evocative story rich
in its use of language, it felt more like a generic story than a Ranma
1/2 one. There was really nothing unique to Akane or the Tendos used; no
reason the girl couldn't have been anyone else whose mother was passing
away.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics