<Snipping the fic>

For your first effort into fanfiction(Way back in the day, huh?), I have to say
you were good from the start. I never got to see the original, so I don't know
what's quite changed but its good as it is now, IMO. Tenno didn't seem to
"angst" ridden to me. Or am I just catching the first wind of what's going to
make Marmalade Boy look like a comedy? <shrugs> Either way, I'll enjoy this
series. I can tell