Anand Rao wrote:

very rough because of it.  This is also my longest episode of this
series.  Hope you enjoy.

Setsuna-chan!  Setsuna-chan!  YEAH!!!  Been waiting for this one, Donny...

Hope you like it!

told me what must be done.  I have come tell you that SHE must be saved

>from an event that will effect the Moon Kingdom."

SHE?  Usagi?  The younger Pluto?

"A week's time.  You will have to find a mission that will occupy her
time.  If you do not she will not survive."

Guess it was Pluto...

You guessed right.

This was the *only* glaring error, IMO...  You absolutely *have* to describe
Ranma's first meeting with the girls after he finds out who they are.  If
not in this episode, in another one.  Maybe Prelude about Usagi?  *hint*
*hint*

Hehe.  Usagi will get her own prelude.  She's a favorite of mine.

different from their future counterparts.  "Thank you Mercury-san.  That
was most kind of you.  You are a very nice person."

Hey, Ranma's is starting to wise-up a bit.  Good idea, sticking his foot
into his mouth too many times around so many suitors would be rather
unhealthy.

Just a bit

"I hate break up this lovers' spat, but you're needed Pluto.  We can't

'hate to'

Endymion.  The image popped up in her mind again as she thought of his
name.  His handsome face.  His dark hair.  His pigtail.  Pigtail!?

great scene.

Just hold on to me and let me do the rest."  She nodded as Ranma
wrapped his arms around her waist.  Invoking the power of her staff, the
both of them vanished.

Mercury looked questioningly at her friends.  "Since when did you need
to hold on to Pluto when she traveled?"

Setsuna, sly old gal...

Ranma waved to the fading image of Pluto until she was entirely gone.
It was time to call a cousin of his.  Usagi explanation better be good.

Once again, show us that explanation...  ^_^

Great one Donny, Like I said i was waiting for this one...  And no, you
didn't disappoint at all.

As always, looking forward to more.

-Anand