Completed in fairly good time. Enjoy, and let us know what you think.

I think you frighten me <G>. This story has more 
potential loops and curves than I could have 
believed possible. 

Couple o' Comments

	Ranma ran his hand through her hair, mouth parting in a 
horrible expression, and shut his eyes.

Err.. not descriptive enough for me, how was it 
horrible? or maybe you mean horrified?

	"Has gone too far," said the Amazon. "Shan Pu sorry. Here 
to make amends. Will help you and Ranma. On oath as a warrior, 
Shan Pu will defend you to best of ability from Tsen and 
others."

	 A cool breeze swept through the garden, bearing with it 
a ragged scrap of colored paper. It tumbled into the koi pond as 
Akane lowered her guard and stepped forward, and then it 
slowly faded and sank.

 Shan Pu as double agent ..oooooooh :)

So my questions are as follows.. 
#1Nabs-chan - Completely Toast or Miracle recovery?
#2Ranma- Loves Akane or Loves Corrupting her?
#3What Happened to Ranma??? (doubt is was just the
	neko ken this time.)

Looking forward to seeing these and other ??? 
answered in future chapters...

kent