On Thu, 26 Mar 1998, Lara Bartram wrote:

    "The Lazarus Project.  That's what he calls it."
    Akane nodded.  "I don't know how people will take that.  I mean,
don't people want to be saved from dying?" she asked.  True, she 
didn't like seeing her sister in such a state, but that didn't mean
other people would like the chance.

wouldn't like

    She actually managed to get her hand corporeal enough to hit every
single floor button on the panel, then as the car stopped at the next
floor, much to the men's consternation, she rushed off to the stairs.

Heh.

    Right away, Tatewaki's hand was ripped away from Akane's. 
Actually, it was like his hand was ripped away from the rest of his
body as he was tossed about in the explosions.  Ripped apart, burned,
crushed, destroyed, he was assured of not being subjected to Tofu's
tortures.

Not like it was ripped away.  It WAS ripped away :)


A good tragedy.  Nice job.

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