Subject: Re: [FFML] [sF] [R.5] Eyes Off: Pilot (0)
From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 3/29/1998, 11:15 AM
To: "Nikholas F. Toledo Zu" <niftol@i-manila.com.ph>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

"Nikholas F. Toledo Zu" <niftol@i-manila.com.ph> wrote:

Here is a concept fic in the Ranmaverse, although it might be
possible to fit it in some other universe.  I highly doubt it.
(There's a challenge of sorts to it, I guess.)  I want you guys
to fine comb this short to the manga continuity... please!

Okay, let's see what I can come up with:

Ryoga:  You can't even life up to your PROMISES?

Should be live, not life.

Talk about your plot devices!  I figure that the "dark locked room"
scenario has been used sometime, but the dynamics above were at-ends
enough so that ANYTHING could come out of it.  It's unique enough a
scenario that no other three characters in a single anime or manga
could have as stable and explosive a situation.  (Not one with just
three people, I think.)  All this, and mostly by dialogue, too!

True, it is a concept with lots of potential.

I'll show what I mean by "anything" in the next part.

So... what do you think?  Again, your call WILL count!

I don't understand what you're asking here.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics