On Sat, 28 Mar 1998, David Johnston wrote:

"I'm not.  The Master's curse has claimed me and 
medicine has no cure for his malice.  He swore that I 
would never achieve my ambition, to father and train an 
heir who would match and surpass me, a warrior whose 
skill and power would be legendary..."  His voice 
weakened and trailed off.  Nodoka almost twitched in 
surprise as he loudly said, "Nodoka!  Swear to me!  
Fulfill my dying wish!"     

Nice dialogue here. 

 

sensibly, then taking her turn to instill the social 
skills which would have made Ranma a well rounded 
individual...ah, she would have been so happy.       

Irony at work :)

There was an awkward silence, then the young giant 
broke the silence, "I'm Kaji, and these are my brothers
Akira and Nikkei."

Interesting.  Nice names :)

seemed to effortlessly anticipate every punch and kick,
weaving just enough to avoid contact.  It was with a
mixture of admiration and embarassment that Akira, flat
on hi back with Ranma's fist a centimetre from his 

his

"-and it's about your only chance of getting a date this
century.  You've been complaining about how the girls 

Heh :)

can't look at things from your point of view, so this
must be your lucky day.  Who would be better at seeing
the boys side of things?"

boy's

Looks like a good start.  

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       
rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/


         "You're the only one I've met who can talk to us, although I've
heard stories of another one in the land full of big green plants
that two-legs use to light fires inside their heads."
--Scruffy Wolf, Parallel Lives 5