Just a comment: the outfit with the blue top is from the OAVs.  The OAVs
take place many, many, years after the original series and Honey's not

school-

age in them.

That may be true, I have no clue.  All I've seen are the New Cutey Honey.  I
wasn't even *alive* when the original Cutey Honey was out. ^_^;

Also, I don't think the villains are called youmas.  Of course, they may as
_well_ be youmas, and I confess to using that word in my summaries of CH

Flash

episodes, but they're not really.

I wasn't saying the villains are youmas, I was saying that she heard
Happosai was a genuine youma.  I was saying that in a way that I felt meant
that she hadn't seen any *actual* youmas, just people who play them on TV =)
(Gomen, bad over-used joke.)

I also think that Akane invites her to stay at their home and go to their
school a _little_ too fast....

I couldn't think of any other way to set everything up.  I'm really bad
about that.  I just look at it this way: Akane is a friendly girl as long as
someone isn't trying to hit on her fiancee.  She is that way in most, if not
all, of my fics.  I guess I should go start on part two? =)  (Great, that
means I have to actually reread part one...sigh =) )