"The Eternal Lost Lurker" <EternalLostLurker@WorldNet.Att.Net> wrote:

Well folks, here's part two of They Call Him Mr. Happy. And if you
thought this fic was strange *before*...MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Let's just
say that I'm a bottomless well of weird shit, and leave it at that.

But we knew that already. :-)

	"Shut up, Genma," Ukyou said sulkily. "Don't blame Ranma for
something someone else did."

That's a very funny thing for her to say... I wonder why Ranma isn't mad
at her like he is at Shamps and Kodachi, BTW.

	Ranma, for his part, was more of a wreck than anyone had ever seen
him. Or rather, her, for Ranma was currently in female form. Ranma
refused to turn male, and every attempt to force him to revert to his
true form had met with failure.

How about some detail here? Did hot water have no effect on him, or did
it evaporate before it could touch him, or what?

	It was really bothering the residents of the Tendou dojo. They'd
seen Ranma deal with a lot of weird shit, and come out as cheerful,
boisterous, and smartassed as ever. 
	This time, however, Ranma wasn't bouncing back.
	In fact, Ranma had become extremely cranky lately.

It'd be nice to see some of this instead of just being told it.

	"Harriden! How dare you, a lowly common wench, address the Black

Isn't it "Harridan?"

	"Why should I remain?" Kodachi asked. "What if I refuse?"
	"I wouldn't advise that," Tofu said. "You see, we're going to be
discussing whether or not Ranma should press charges against you."

I doubt the police will want to go anywhere near Kodachi.

	Janine blushed. "No...you're in Marin County General, Mr..." she
frowned. "I'm sorry. We didn't find any identification on you..."
	He smiled. "Quite alright. My name," he said, taking the nurse's
hand in his own, "is Don Juan." He lightly brushed his lips across
the back of her hand. 

Heh. Wonder if he landed on his head!


I'm enjoying this so far... though I bet the weirdest shit is yet to
come!


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics