"Donny" <chengdo@shaw.wave.ca> wrote:

	Ranma watched with a bored expression as Shampoo began pummeling
Mousse.  He wouldn't even be here for this formal challenge if the old

wouldn't even have been here

	Mousse let out a sudden battle cry and closed his eyes as he released
ALL of his weapons out from every which way direction.  He kept his eyes

"Way" and "direction" are redundant -- take out one of them.

	Shampoo suddenly flew backwards as she had apparently thought Mousse
was done for.  She lay dazed for a few stunning moments.  The crowd all

had been done for.

	Akane jumped up for joy.  "See, Ranma, I told you that she and Mousse
had feelings for each other.  Aren't you sorry you didn't give up that
fight to Mousse that time now."

now?"

	Cologne looked as if all remaining blood in her system had been
drained.

Which probably wouldn't be all that much. :-)

 "Is... is there anyone else that would challenge Mousse his
claim?"  Though she asked the general populace, everyone knew that the
question was directed to Ranma.

Hiroshi: We will!

Daisuke: Yeah! Except we're no good at fighting, so instead we hereby
challenge Mousse to a game of tiddly-winks!

	Cologne without even turning to look at him declared Mousse's claim as
valid.  It seemed she had heard Ranma soft answer.

Ranma's

The End. (maybe)

Really nice, Donny. I don't see why it's sad, though -- even from your
point of view. Ranma still has the rest of them! :-)


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics