That was a little unexpected, turning Kasumi into a cat (neat idea though)
. This still remains a very good story so far. The only minor comment I
have is please resist making a Mousse /Shampoo pairing. It's been done to
death and really isn't necessary for this particular fic. Maybe it was just
idle thinking from Shampoo's point of view. And she relizes Mousse is
ultimatlely a friend regardless of how poorly she treats him at times. But
it would be really annoying for it to end up with Shampoo telling him wo ai
ni. At any rate, I still enjoy Johnathon's chracter very much and he has yet
to become boring or cliched.

Well, I am not one of those who think that the Mousse-Shampoo pairing is out of
the question, so I am exploring the possiblilty I'm afraid.  I liked the
Canonical matchups and tend to go with them, part of the time.  As for Shampoo
saying those words to Mousse?  It would take a much longer fic then I intend to
write.  There a is possibility there, with years of patience it might be
possible, but they need those years.  When both of them have matured, if they
haven't found other people in their lives, they might find each other.  That is
what I see, and intend to explore, nothing more.  (Probably)

Keep up the Good Work

Thank you, I will.