Wow, this is amazingly similiar to an idea I'd been batting around for
some time. Quincy as Luthor, it's bleeding obvious when you think about
it.
Now, I did have a problem with Superman's internal dialogue at the
beginning. He sounded too immature, too cocky. If you wanted to
portray him as treating this as routine there are better ways. For
instance, you could have him think about Lois or the next story he was
going to file as Clark Kent.
I was inspired in the internal dialogue by Superman Red. He seems to act
somewhat funkier than Blue, and in a recent issue he even said that the good
guys always win.
I just don't see Superman being so cocky. At heart, he's a humble man,
in contrast to Batman's absolute arrogance. He knows full well that you
can't always depend on the good guys winning.
That's how he always ACTS, but as I said, Supes Red led me to believe that
maybe he's more lighthearted than we all thought. But, seeing as how you and a
number of other people have complained about this, I should probably tone down
the cockiness.
How does Superman immediately know to go to Genom, anyway? I'm assuming
Luther is using another clone body to be Quincy, and Genom probably
didn't even exist when Supes was locked up. Superman shouldn't have the
first clue where to go looking for Luthor. In fact, I would think his
first instinct would be to go look for Lois.
I never said he went straight to Genom. I used "leaped Genom Tower in a single
bound" because it sounded cool. He only lept OVER the Tower, he's not going to
it. In fact, his first instinct IS to look for Lois. But she's dead (old age)
and other people are living in their apartment.
Just as a note, I believe Kryptonians may not age the same as humans.
IIRC from "World of Krypton", they used to use cloned body parts to
extend their lives, but eventually turned to genetic manipulation. The
thing is, since Kryptonians shaved their heads, they never bothered to
adjust the genes controlling hair. That's why all future Superman
stories show him growing grey hair.
Well, he's going to look somewhat older than he actually is. Fourty-odd years
of radiation'll do that to a guy. Think Pa Kent, but without the wrinkles and
a full head of mostly gray hair.
He'll also have a new secret identity. Very soon, the Megatokyo Tribune will
acquire a new reporter by the name of Kent Clarkson. ^_-
> Don't plan to see any other super-people show up in this thing, though.
> they're all dead. Quin- err, Luthor was VERY thorough. Flash? Dead. Green
> Lantern? Dead. Aquaman? Dead. Batman? Dead. Martian Manhunter? Dead.
Wonder
> Woman? Dead. (well, in her case, raped, THEN dead) In short, everybody's
dead.
> Expect a visit to the meta-humans graveyard.
>
I would strongly urge you to rethink this a little. Having Luthor kill
everyone just out of sheer bloodymindedness doesn't make much sense.
Genom's style of domination isn't something the average Superhero would
fight very well against, and I don't see Luthor embarking on a total
slaughter without reason. For one thing, it puts him at far too much
risk. I mean, hell, why even bother with Aquaman? That would just get
a very angry kingdom of Atlantis hunting for the man responsible for the
death of their king.
Aquaman dies because he's in JLA, and they are like, the highest members on
Luthors hitlist. He might not (probably won't, actually) kill ALL the others,
but the Justice League MUST die. Plus, when the hell does Quincy ever go
underwater?
There's really no reason superheroes can't still exist, it's just that
Luthor did the sensible thing and came to Japan to avoid them (easily
getting the relativelty few Japanese heroes out of the way.) I would
suggest Captain Marvel or the Flash and some others might still be
around. Basically anyone who doesn't have the detective skills to track
down Luthor or isn't likely to conflict with him in the natural course
of events.
Coming to Japan wouldn't do all that much good. I mean, Megatokyo is subjected
to huge, menacing, only-a-superhero-can-handle-it kinda things all the time.
The Kanto earthquake, for example, would have attracted hordes. And Genom is a
multinational corporation: Eventually, one of the metahumans would take it
into his head to go to the source.
The only conceivable time that superheros wouldn't bother with Japan is after
the Sabers showed up. They would be recognized as superheros by other
superheros almost immediatly, and they try to avoid each others turf unless
invited.
I would also suggest that he only _thinks_ he's killed Batman. Batman
is just as smart as Luthor.
As before, Batman is in the JLA, and therefor must die. It's pretty
ignominious, too; a sniper guns down Bruce Wayne at a public appearence. His
identity comes out after his death. Nightwing sees to his burial. Robin's
secret identitiy remains uncomprised.
Nightwing himself lives until the early 2020's, when the first Boomer rampages
in Mega-Gotham prove too much for him to handle. As of 2034, only Tim (Robin)
is still around, and he spends most of his time drunk into stupor and staring
at the monuments in the Batcave. He's not quite right in the head either. In
fact, it will be either him or Jimmy Olson who brings Supes up to speed on
what he's missed.
Having Luthor suddenly able to kill every single superhero in the world
when a thousand other genius supervillains couldn't handle even one
totally blows my suspension of disbelief here. (I know you can come up
with a thousand plausible scenarios, but it just isn't possible within
the framework of the DC universe. It just couldn't happen that way.)
I'll have to reluctantly concur. He only kills the Justice League right away;
the others die later, whether of old age, retirement, or they started to make
to much of a nuisance of themselves.
Besides, I'd really like to hear Luthor's plan for getting rid of the
Spectre. "Well I'll just kill him. Oh damn, he's already dead. And
omnipotent to boot."
Admittedly, I know very little about Spectre. However, he doesn't appear to
intervene directly and personally all that often; he advises, and shows
consequences. The biggest thing he ever did, in my recollection, was help hold
the universe together during the whole Amalgam thing, and then he still wasn't
personally involved in the hero's lives.
Oh yeah, and if you still have Wonder Woman dead, take out the rape bit.
I know you want to establish Luthor as a bad-ass, but I can't picture
him ordering that. Not against someone with whom he has no personal
malice. He isn't that sort of evil.
Actually, the rape bit was a joke. that isn't going to happen.
"When writing Superman, think what Batman would do in the same situation.
Then write the exact opposite."
I would say that's more true for personality traits. Sometimes their
means will differ, but not totally. Batman will intimidate, but like
Superman, he won't kill.
That's what I meant. And they ARE pretty different, method-wise; I've never
seen Supes resort to the kinds of interrogation Batman does. Plus, Batman
depends a lot more on finesse and less on brute force.
-Mercutio
"A plague a both your houses!"