Something disturbs me about this fic, Gary.

I wouldn't dream of discouraging a "Ranma-gets-pregnant" story.  <cough>

But I have to ask... why?

What purpose does it serve?

It seems a bit... gross to me, the way it actually happens.

Will this serve some future purpose in the main story?  Or is this just to
be "cute" - "Look, Ranma and Akane *each* bore a child!" and "Here's a way
Ranma could get pregnant that no one's thought of yet!"

I have faith enough in you to suspect the former must be true.  But as the
story stands right now, it smacks too much of the latter.

It kind of turned me off for some reason, since I could see no purpose to
it.  Also, it raised a bunch of questions and then dropped them
unceremoniously, with no real answers.

But the *good* news is that we finally got the preliminaries out of the
way.  :)  It only took you... what, a year?   ^_^   Too bad Taleswapper
gave up reviewing in that time, neh?  This has the makings or a great
epic.

-Richard