Subject: [FFML] [C&C][Ranma][Lemon] Hentai Adept, part 4
From: "Philip C. Mak" <pmak@cs.dal.ca>
Date: 3/24/1998, 11:35 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Another great part...too bad I already read this a long time ago. :) Ahh
the problems with reposts...it was still nice to read it again though. 
There are a relatively precious few lemon fics out there that set up lemon
scenes just for the sake of doing so, and this fic does that pretty well. 
Throw ICness to the wind when necessary, lemons are fun! :) I especially
liked the Ranma/Ukyou pairing. 

As for C&C, first of all one thing is confusing: First there's the scene
with Cologne putting the aphrodesiac thing in Ukyou's okonomiyaki mixture,
then later all the baseball team players rape her successfully. Then later
there's a scene with the baseball players advancing on Ukyou (after
injesting the okonomiyaki), but she is rescued by Ranma before they can
get to her. What gives here, was Ukyou raped or not? Same deal with Akane;
did Ranma eat her food and then rape her, or did he run off with
Happousai, Genma and Soun to avoid eating it (and not rape her)?

Regarding Nabiki and Kunou, I can understand Nabiki throwing herself at
Kunou because of the aphrodesiac she ate in Akane's cooking, but why would
Kunou just accept her like that? He did not eat Akane's cooking, and
Nabiki is neither Akane nor Ranma-chan.

So what's next in part 5...Ryouga showing up while Akane is still under
the influence of the drugged ramen? :) Ranma waking up in bed with Ukyou
after it wears off? Shampoo breaking into Ucchan's and joining Ranma and
Ukyou, making it a threesome? :) 

-Philip Mak (pmak@cs.dal.ca)